The goal of this Challenge is to complete or continue the given first stanza of the Tan Renga by writing a two line stanza (7-7 syllables) towards the first stanza by association on a part of the first stanza. I find it tricky enough getting into my own headspace with all the events going on around me, so trying to embrace someone else’s and then extrapolate further – aiee!!
as a white dove lands
words unspoken yet knowing-
the glow of the dawn.
Thoughts embraced fly free to be
as one with the freshness of life.
OOh!! So tricky! Wanted to take this into several directions that my
subconscious suggested, but forced myself to stay on track!