Friday Fictioneers 13th June 2014, Room with a last view…

Greetings! Below is my entry for this weeks Friday Fictioneers, courtesy of the ever amazing Go there. be nice!


PHOTO PROMPT Copyright-Ted Strutz

So many rooms.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Drip.

Houses.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Drip.

Alleys and gardens.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Dripdrip.

So beautiful, all that open-space that changes and then gets built on.                                                                                                                                                         Dripdripdrip.

You’d like that. You always did, telling me every day how we needed to get out before they developed the hell out of our area. Talk talk, tell TELL!!


Tongues are useful like that though, don’t you think? For talking with. Hey, amazing how pink they are too when you hold them up to the light? Seriously, look at that colour.


It’s almost as vivid as that other pink thing I’ve got hooked up over there…


20 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers 13th June 2014, Room with a last view…

  1. Whew, this gave me shivers. I thought this was a pleasant, contemplative piece until I got to the tongue part! Reading it again, I can appreciate your gradual revealing of his demented mind. Very engaging and unexpected!

  2. It took me a while (I think I’ve said before that I can be a bit slow to catch on). He’s cutting someone up, and the drips are blood, right? That’s gruesome… seriously, seriously gruesome.

  3. Kingsley, That was well written. I agree that it was extremely gross if the commenters had figured it out. O_o I’d rather not picture it. Well done but not the type of story I usually choose to read because I have quite a good imagination. That’s the reason I don’t watch TV programs like “The Walking Dead.” Well done. 🙂 —Susan

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