Writing 101 – Day 4, The Serial Killer – Loss

From the gem of haiku awesomeness that is http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.co.uk/

Perfect self denied,

as physical needs increased,

Soul weeps for futures loss.

I’m talking selfish satisfaction here btw, not the unconditional kind. Though, technically, all and every type of satisfaction, be it physical, emotional, etc, is inherently selfish. As we can only ever experience the Self, and that imperfect behaviour, can we ever be perfect?

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2 thoughts on “Writing 101 – Day 4, The Serial Killer – Loss

  1. Just wanted you to know that your post on loss is in my email. I am pasting it in this comment in case you can’t get it anywhere else. I have your other posts if you want me to do the same.
    From the gem of haiku awesomeness that is http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.co.uk/

    Perfect self denied,

    as physical needs increased,

    Soul weeps for futures loss.

    I’m talking selfish satisfaction here btw, not the unconditional kind. Though, technically, all and every type of satisfaction, be it physical, emotional, etc, is inherently selfish. As we can only ever experience the Self, and that imperfect behaviour, can we ever be perfect?

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