Carpe Diem – Hunting 25 5 14

I’m trying to post every day something, whether it be a poem, a growl or some fiction. I’m particularly drawn to my poetry at the moment, as people often comment that my prose reads very much like a poem at times, due to the imagery and language, so I want to try and develop this part of my repertoire, such as it is!

This is from once more. Pop over and say hi!

Fate’s cruel twist snaps hope,

aspiration destroyed by

foolish thoughts, not deeds.


And a second crept in as well…

Striped hope follows in the

path of eloquence, yet youths

desire feeds own death.


I’m working on this form; let me know how it’s going!

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